Can someone please correct this paragraph?

The art of storytelling depend not only on what is being told, but aslo how it is being told. A certain energy or charisma are what comes thru in the work of any storyteller whose worth listening too. The artists tone of voice body language and expression. Adds to the plot of the story itself. Colorful images and thought provoking insights is communicated to the listeners through the storyteller's own intrest in the story. If you set down and listen to a story told in a somber monotonous tone, you will probly lose interest, that is why a storyteller's ability to be expressive energetic and inerested are what gives life to the words who create the story.

How may calories are involved in the process?

20 grams of ice at -10 degrees celsius is heated until it melts and vaporizes into steam at 115 degrees celsius. How may calories are involved in the process?

Are LED taillights brighter than regular taillights?

light emitting diodes are typically brighter then regular automotive light bulbs and usually last longer. they can cause issues with turn signals sometimes blowing fuses.

Where can i buy cheap gym equipment?

hi umm im looking for some gym equipment and i need them to be CHEAP, i dont want to order online i want to go to the store and pick it up. the equipent i need are dumbell/barbell set, flys,leg press,bench press and a PowerLine Lat Machine.i need the closest place near me i live in toronto ontario near weston road. the weights that go on the leg press, bench press, flys and etc need to start from like 5 or 10 lbs to a 120 and over,a little lower than 120 is ok, also the barbells and dumbells set need to start from 5 to 10 lbs to a 100 and over. if possible i want some of these to be attached together because at my school they have a leg press a PowerLine Lat Machine attached to each other so if i could get that i would appriciate it if not then i want the equipment buy itself.

Government--1968 democratic convention?

read this: a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1968_Democratic_National_Convention" rel="nofollow"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1968_Democr…/a

Are the students at the top colleges really as bad as the people on college confidential?

CC is not a poor source of information. you will run into obnoxious people and nice people everywhere. it seems as though you have run into the parents who have too much time on their hands and who like to gloat about their children's achievements. that's all it is; annoying parents. again, you will find all types of people everywhere. don't be discouraged by an unrepresentative sample. visit schools and talk to students. i ended up at an ivy and one of the reasons was because i truly think everyone there is kind and always willing to help out. most of the time when i looked lost, i didn't even have to ask for help, i was just offered it.

Why are they getting wider? Its just salsa!!!?

I decided to join the Ymca to relieve my stress and get distracted I go to the gym about 3-4times a week and besides getting on the treadmill I also do the Zumba(Dance cl-Salsa, merengue, samba, hip-hop etc...) The cles are great and I love dancing . Now my concern is that my legs are getting bigger, and I noticed my jeans are fitting me tighter(thigh area) is there anyway that I can slim my legs down and still have them look toned? I am not use to big muscular legs, and I find it so weird that all I do is dance and they are building up like this! I cannot imagine what they would look like if I was to jog 3-4times a week! Any suggestions to slim them down but keep them muscular?